[Dandelion on Fire: Greene Island Mystery I] Sherry Torgent

I recently became a reviewer for a small publishing company located in North Carolina called Blue Ink Press. Dandelion on Fire is the first novel I’ve received to review from them. Blue Ink Press was founded in 2015. Their aim is to represent and publish young adult authors, but they also represent local authors from their area. I’m very excited to work with them!

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Hardy only wants one thing: to make it through his senior year of high school unscathed so he can escape Greene Island for college on the mainland. Unfortunately for Hardy, things never go the way he plans. When a mistake lands him in community service with a strange new girl named Darcy, things begin to unravel. Darcy has a secret. And suddenly, that secret connects Hardy and Darcy in ways that begin to spiral out of control. Everyone says that Greene Island is cursed. Hardy is starting to believe it.

The plot of Dandelion on Fire was steady throughout the novel. Unfortunately, steady doesn’t always make for quick reading. I felt very relaxed while reading this, even during the moments that were meant to be fast-paced and nerve wracking. There was a calmness to the writing style. The plot did pick up toward the end of the novel, but because of the earlier meandering of the plot, it didn’t feel very balanced. All of the action was clustered at the end. As a result, I ended up being a little surprised at the conclusion because it seemed so sudden. I expected more pages.  The action at the end made me excited about what Sherry Torgent was doing with the story. It was just unfortunate that it hadn’t been included earlier.

Dandelion on Fire is a mystery with slow pacing. There weren’t enough moments where Hardy and Darcy discovered something that gave answers toward the larger mystery; instead, I felt that it focused on the mundane moments of Hardy’s day-to-day life too much. Something exciting would happen, and I would think “this is it, this is when we find out– –” but then it would seem to backtrack. Hardy would be concerned about a senior picnic instead of being worried about the murder that had taken place on the island. The book also  has a supernatural element to it. For some reason, the Curse of Viola has given certain individuals powers. Throughout the novel, these supernatural things are mentioned, but never really focused on. I hope that a more solid explanation is given to us in the next novel.  Like much of the action, the supernatural points of the novel were clustered at the end. Because of that, the ending seemed abrupt. There’s no return journey to “normality” with a greater understanding of what has happened to Hardy.  There were a lot of questions, both about the supernatural and the mystery, but few seemed to be answered. It’s a good start to a series because we’re not given the complete answers in this first book. It pushes readers to check out the next book in the series.

The book focuses on Hardy and Darcy, with a few side characters that come in and out of the action. It’s a novel about them as much as it’s a mystery. Hardy was a straightforward, very simplistic character. He longed for a return to normality and often had to be dragged about by Darcy. Gradually this began to change, but as a result of his initial actions I felt that he was kind of boring. He didn’t want to take charge of his protagonist status. Contrasting him we have Darcy, who was far more interesting and engaging. It’s really too bad that she wasn’t the one telling the story. Darcy has a bit of a mystery surrounding her, and we weren’t given any answers about her. Not really. I hope that the next novel goes into more detail about her. She went headfirst into possibly dangerous situations because she was curious; that curiosity drove much of the story and plot for me. I liked how the friendship between Hardy and Darcy progressed. At first, the difference in their ages bothers Hardy. I remember feeling that way as a senior in high school when looking at the new faces of the freshmen. But then Hardy, like everyone at some point after they’ve graduated from high school, realizes that the age doesn’t matter. As soon as he decides that, their friendship really bloomed as they became more engaged with the mystery around them.

It may not have been as fast-paced as I would have liked, but I have to admire what Sherry Torgent did with Dandelion on Fire. Namely, the fact that it’s clean. Granted, that’s not something I’m overly concerned about because I tend to read a variety of young adult novels of varying content. It was interesting to read a novel that didn’t have sex as an underlying tension. Dandelion on Fire reminded me of a wholesome family movie: good for everyone. While it may not be something that older readers will scramble to read, I do think that it will be really good for the younger side of young adult readers. It’s interesting, has a mystery, romance, and supernatural elements, and ends in a way that is hopeful and moderately well-rounded (to the extent that you could maybe read it as a stand-alone novel). It’s possible that the mystery started in Dandelion on Fire is not quite concluded and will continue in the second book, but it’s also possible that an entirely new mystery will start.

3 stars.

I’d like to thank the publisher again for providing me with a copy of Dandelion on Fire in exchange for an honest review. Dandelion on Fire was first released on January 31st, 2015. A sequel, The Curse of Viola, was published March 13th, 2016.

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